DJ Chino Posted May 13, 2008 Share Posted May 13, 2008 **camera fades in on The High Risk Gymnasium** **Its night time, DJ Chino is in the practice ring doing vertical push-ups. Marty McGahee comes out of the showers and is towel drying his hair** Marty: Cmon DJ! It's like 11:45! Go home. You've been training all day. DJ: Stop.....being.....a pussy.....73..........74.......75..... Marty: And where the hell is Hazel? DJ: That's ....... what .........I've ....been wondering.... 80.....81......82.... **Marty looks around the room. He goes over to the pile of mail thats been building up by the door.** Marty: DJ, how long have you been here? DJ: About.....two.......weeks.....93....94... Marty: Uh huh....and how often have you seen Hazel? DJ: Once.... for about thirty minutes.....something's up....99....100! **DJ collapses back down onto the canvas** Marty: Holy shit dude! You okay? DJ: I'm fine....I just need to...catch my breath. **Just then the door to the gym opens up. Its Hazel. The boys look over at her as she drops her duffel bag** Marty: Hey. Hazel: Hey. DJ: Where've you been? Hazel: Busy. Im goin home but I just needed to drop the stuff off for my gymnastics class tomorrow. DJ: Fine. You got time to stick around? Hazel: No. What for anyway? You've been busy kicking your own ass since Lution you havent had time for anything else. DJ: Excuse me? Hazel: You heard me! Ever since you and Marty got rid of Shawman you've done nothing but obsess over how to "get back on top". The only problem with that DJ is that you were never on top to begin with! **Hazel slams the door and storms out to her car. The guys are left in shock.** Marty: Um....that didn't go very well. I knew you guys were having problesm I didnt think it was that bad. DJ: She's sleeping around. I know she is. Now shes just looking for that excuse to get out and make herself feel justified about the whole thing. I've been through bullshit like this before. I can see right through it. Marty: So what are you going to do about it? DJ: I don't know. Marty: What did you do before? DJ: I walked in on them together. Nothin hurts more. But nothing else gives me more of an excuse to kick the living shit out of a human being. Marty: So lets fucking take care of business. We follow her and beat the hell out of whoever shes doin. All this bullshit you guys are goin through are taking things way out of focus. You need to get your head straight man. DJ: *Sigh* Whatever. Im gonna grab something to eat. I got more work to do. **Camera fades out on The High Risk gymnasium sign** To be continued... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Charles Royal Posted May 13, 2008 Share Posted May 13, 2008 Good roleplay, little overuse of swearing. Other thant that I liked it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacob Trance Posted May 13, 2008 Share Posted May 13, 2008 I got bitched at for doing it... someone bitch at Chino. Good roleplay though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nick Kage Posted May 13, 2008 Share Posted May 13, 2008 dj when you write roleplays imagine if they would be shown on tv.... swearing wouldn't be used. "When you're pushed... Killing is as easy as breathing!" http://img526.imageshack.us/img526/766/kagebannernv9.png http://www.selectmediafestival.org/2006/oct21.jpg Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DJ Chino Posted May 13, 2008 Author Share Posted May 13, 2008 I didnt even realize it, my bad the next ones are gonna be better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adrian Bold Posted May 13, 2008 Share Posted May 13, 2008 Hazel was in Boldo the clowns locker room..HONK HONK! http://i.imgur.com/zP10f.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jacob Trance Posted May 13, 2008 Share Posted May 13, 2008 Boldo the clown and Michael Jackson... both like kids... wear make up... you do the math. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Leon Valentine Posted May 13, 2008 Share Posted May 13, 2008 Hazel was in Boldo the clowns locker room..HONK HONK! God she must have been desperate... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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